Painting by Ruth McNally Barshaw |
Her
baby hands burst open like spring buds.
You
invited me to that movie in college where
I
put my head on your shoulder
and
you took my hand,
roots penetrated, surrounded,
fed us.
roots penetrated, surrounded,
fed us.
She
studies both sides
and
the introduction is awkward.
We leafed in the darkened theater
in the light of the projector.
in the light of the projector.
You
took my hand and
I
thought I would never be lonely again.
It
seems almost accidental when it finally happens:
Hands find each other,
Neurons
fire.
She
lights the room
and
squeals at this sparkling thing.
We
held onto each other,
opened
like flowers;
hopeful.
Hemispheres converge
and we watch it all
from
half a world away
until time collapses
until time collapses
in
a refulgence of light and longing
to
capture a childhood, a love.
I
think I've accepted it,
tangled roots and all,
tangled roots and all,
until
she turns, smiling
and
reaches
for us.
Outside
snow piles.
Inside
it is spring.
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Your label is funny, poetry major or not, I love the back and forth flow of the poem. This little moment you captured is so "blown up" and I love the reference to light early on in the poem.
ReplyDeleteShivers. I love this, especially the last line.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is amazing! The back and forth, the connections...brilliant! I've read it several times and each time I find something I didn't notice before. Such a sweet picture!
ReplyDeleteLove the infusion of the plant words. My favorite was "We leafed in the darkened theater."
ReplyDeleteLoved these lines:
ReplyDeleteI think I've accepted it,
tangled roots and all,
until she turns, smiling
and reaches
for us.
Beautiful, Lori. Wonderful painting, Ruth.
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